Start with the facts
- Open with one sentence: what it is, how big, where. For example: "Bright 16 m² room in a three-person WG in Ottensen."
- Then the money: the rent, what the bills cover, and the deposit. Unclear costs are the main reason people don't ask for a viewing.
- Then the dates: from when, and for how long.
Then what makes people choose
- The people: who lives there, what they do, how you share the kitchen and bathroom, and whether you do things together.
- The area: the nearest stop, shops, and how long it takes to get to the centre or the university.
- What you like most about the room or the flat. One honest sentence beats a list of adjectives.
Keep it honest and easy to read
- Short paragraphs, no capital letters for emphasis, and go easy on exclamation marks.
- Mention the downsides someone will notice anyway: a busy street, a fourth floor without a lift, a small window.
- 400 to 900 characters is enough. The room builder can write a first draft from your answers: use "Write a first draft for me" and replace the parts in brackets.
